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I'm sorry for turning this in so late and in a rush, but I didn't succeed in finishing the extended version in time. I'll post it later, that's a promise. 
I apologize for possible mistakes.
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Smoke, Fur And Stone © and ™ LJ Phillips 2014. All artwork, concepts and related characters are copyright and trademarks of LJ Phillips. Fanart and fanfic is welcome as long as it's non-profit and includes a disclaimer.
I apologize for possible mistakes.
All characters of Smoke, Fur and stone belong to the awesome
Smoke, Fur And Stone © and ™ LJ Phillips 2014. All artwork, concepts and related characters are copyright and trademarks of LJ Phillips. Fanart and fanfic is welcome as long as it's non-profit and includes a disclaimer.
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This is marvelous, my friend I really enjoyed it. Cal's childlike excitement at his birthday was so endearing.
I really enjoyed it. Cal's childlike excitement at his birthday was so endearing. Cal: Hahaha, you're so smart, Dolph! Sure thing, you're giving them a biiiig surprise in the end, eh?
(Cal sticking out his tongue and making some crude gestures.)
Dolph: Uh.. well.. Oh, so late already? Sorry, but I have an appointment right now.
And his crude attempts at male bonding and convincing his pack mate that he's so very straight had me in stitches. And their irritation with him was very believable.
Your choice of Rabbit's gift was inspired. Poor innocent Cal would have no idea what they are. But Quartz certainly did.
Lovely, lovely piece of writing, my friend 